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2024年甘肃省白银市中考英语作文优秀范文

锦鲤家教2024年10月08日 01:01优秀范文
96. 假期对学生来说是一段放松自己、关心家人、充实自我的时间。对于即将到来的暑假你有什么计划和安排?根据以下思维导图提示,以“My ________ Holiday Plans”为题,用英语写一篇80词左右的假期计划。

2024年甘肃省白银市中考英语作文优秀范文【兰州家教

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96. 假期对学生来说是一段放松自己、关心家人、充实自我的时间。对于即将到来的暑假你有什么计划和安排?根据以下思维导图提示,以“My ________ Holiday Plans”为题,用英语写一篇80词左右的假期计划。


要求:1.先补全题目,并将题目抄写在答题卡书面表达作答区域;

2.内容包括提示中所有的写作要点;

3.条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;

4.文中不能出现真实的人名、学校等信息;

【答案】例文:

My Wonderful Holiday Plans

A holiday is a special time for students to take a break from school and relax. It’s a chance to enjoy some free time after working hard in classes.

During my holiday, I plan to spend wonderful time with my family by having picnics in the park, playing board games together, and cooking meals with my parents. I also want to show my care for my parents by helping with household chores, such as washing dishes or tidying up the house. Additionally, I want to do much reading. Reading makes a full man. Besides, travelling is another good choice for such a long holiday. If I have time, I also want to volunteer in our neighborhood.

I look forward to creating lasting memories with my family, reading more, learning new things, and showing more love to the world during this holiday. By completing these plans with joy, I’m sure I’ll return feeling happy, connected, and ready for new experiences.

【解析】

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;

②时态:以“一般现在时”为主;

③提示:写作时首先补全所给题目;写作要点已给出,写作时注意不要遗漏信息,可适当补充细节。

[写作步骤]

第一步,开门见山,介绍假期的含义以及对学生来说假期是什么;

第二步,介绍“我”自己的假期计划,以及假期计划怎样帮助“我”成长;

第三步,阐述个人的期望以及假期计划的完成会给自己带来什么。

[亮点词汇]

①take a break休息一下;

②by doing sth.通过做某事

③tidy up整理

④look forward to期待

[高分句型]

If I have time, I also want to volunteer in our neighborhood.(if引导条件状语从句)